[FE] First Movement - Pg 25

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IT'S SATURDAY!

I feel like this page is all over the place, and looking back it probably would have been a better idea to put a transition panel between panels one and two. I actually finished the first panel months ago, and only recently did the second one, so that might be a reason why things feel disjointed between the two. I also blame recent script changes. This sequence was originally going to be a lot longer, but I condensed things, and now it will probably only last until around page 35. (My original projection was until page 40.)

Regardless, I feel like the upcoming pages are important to establish the relation between the Light Brigade and the Hyperforce, since I don't expect my audience to be familiar with my OCs.

So, next week is the comic's first anniversary. I will probably try and do something special for that.

As always, constructive criticism is encouraged and appreciated.

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