[FE] First Movement: The Spear - Pg 23

Fu and Sedna remind me of a Taylor Swift song. *is shot*

Yeah, they're supposed to/going to be a couple. For the record, First Movement is going to focus more on plot and action, while the Second Movement will be focused on drama and interactions between the characters.

Too dark again? I didn't really like the more saturated look in the previous page, but it was brighter. I haven't found my compromise between the two. I doubt I'll ever redo pages, though, partly because I don't have the time, partly because I'm a slow poke, and partly because it reminds me that I've improved from when I started when I started First Encounters last year - and I find that motivating.

Buuut I might do something special for May, which is when First Encounters turns a year old.